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As the sun goes down
When the stars shine bright
You will fall in deep slumber
Your imagination will go wild
This is called a dream
Where you can do things you like
Maybe even get a little fright
A sound might get you up
Or a little jolt of pain
Even when you get too warm
When the sun peers up the sky
When your parents say your name
You wake up from your land
A nightmare you may remember
Or a dream you'll forget
And you'll wait for the hour
When your imagination takes over
Okay, this is a peom for school....

Everybody likes it exepte for me.. I want you guys to tell me the truth, is it beautiful or crummy. Will I get an A or a D, and should I continue writing poems??
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