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Please Comment and Critique!! :D

I love this!!! PLEASE Comment!! :please:

I made this sketch with like 20 refs!!

Who should I draw with this??
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

first off id like to point out how much you have improved with your drawings <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />

heres my critiques:

1. the muzzle does seem a bit off, i think that it may be to narrow and long, the jawline should be thicker, and not as much as a dip down on the top

2. the neck seems, odd, i dont know what it is

3. the body seems much to skinny, the chest should be a bit thicker

4. the hair seems afully stiff, add some swooping lines to make it look like it flows

i love the hind legs!
they are very good lol.
overall good job, fix those few things and youl have yourself one hell of a horse! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />